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1. "Your" is used incorrectly multiple times when it should be "You're" (contraction of "you are"):
- "Your a obese loser" → "You're an obese loser"
- "Your not f*cking" → "You're not f*cking"
- "Your more like" → "You're more like"
2. "a obese" should be "an obese" (proper use of indefinite article before a vowel sound)
3. Missing capitalization:
- "fatfück" is written as one word and missing capitalization
- Inconsistent capitalization throughout ("Who," "Back," "Type" are randomly capitalized)
4. Excessive punctuation:
- Overuse of exclamation points and question marks
- No proper sentence endings (periods where appropriate)
5. Run-on sentences and poor structure:
- Many sentences are strung together with multiple exclamation points instead of proper punctuation
- Missing commas where needed for proper clause separation
6. Word compounds:
- "fatfück" should be two separate words
^ 1. "Your" is used incorrectly multiple times when it should be "You're" (contraction of "you are"): - "Your a obese loser" → "You're an obese loser" - "Your not f*cking" → "You're not f*cking" - "Your more like" → "You're more like" 2. "a obese" should be "an obese" (proper use of indefinite article before a vowel sound) 3. Missing capitalization: - "fatfück" is written as one word and missing capitalization - Inconsistent capitalization throughout ("Who," "Back," "Type" are randomly capitalized) 4. Excessive punctuation: - Overuse of exclamation points and question marks - No proper sentence endings (periods where appropriate) 5. Run-on sentences and poor structure: - Many sentences are strung together with multiple exclamation points instead of proper punctuation - Missing commas where needed for proper clause separation 6. Word compounds: - "fatfück" should be two separate words